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Dumb Story by Avonlee, literature

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Dumb Story

Ch. 1 The Long Way Lockers slammed and bodies pushed past each other in a rush to leave the school after the last bell. Aytra quickly found the old locker room door and darted inside. Once the door shut she could barely hear the noise coming from the hall over the rythmatic beating of her heart. Her breathing was quick and shallow. Its rasping filled the dark, chilly, locker room as she tried to calm herself. They couldn’t know where she was, they wouldn’t wait and look for her, she continued trying to insure herself. Slowly the sound of her excited heart calmed. The noise from the hall was becoming softer by the minute, but Aytr

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Artist // Hobbyist // Varied

United States
Deviant for 16 years
She / Her

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Current Residence: in your closet...eating your coookies D: lol
Favourite genre of music: ROCK<3<3<3 *eats caps*
Favourite photographer: none
Favourite style of art: the pretty kind lol
Operating System: computer O.O
MP3 player of choice: the one that works B
Shell of choice: shineh conche shell *everthings better when it's shineh*
Wallpaper of choice: black :P
Skin of choice: my own you wierdy lol
Favourite cartoon character: Gir <3<3<3
Personal Quote: I'll be your Huckleberry

Favourite Visual Artist

Tidal from hoof-printz

Favourite Movies

Chronicles of Riddick and Tombstone

Favourite TV Shows

The Walking Dead

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus curently...changes by mood and weather lol

Favourite Books

Rot and Ruin, Smack, Unwind

Favourite Writers

poet: Edgar Allen Poe writer: Stephenie Meyers

Favourite Games

Sly Cooper, cabela's deer hunt, tony hawks, Kingdom Hearts, left 4 dead 2, horse isle 2 LC,

Favourite Gaming Platform

solid ground :P just kidding lol (PS2)

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Pencils + Colored Pencils + digital (tablet when it works mouse when i dont get too frusterated) + paint (oil, acrylic, water color) + pastels (oil and soft) + model horses + polymer clay + paper + canvas + brushes + computer + furniture...so anything lol

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art, music (rock <3), writing, horses, and playing the piano/guitar/ukulele

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Avonlee

Jun 4, 2009

Help...please!

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Ok. So I'm kind of writing this story. It started out as a product of bordom and kept going into a full blown story. I've tried to get english teachers to read it for the past year to edit it (because everyone I know keeps telling me to get it published) but the english teachers keep pushing me off. I'm still working out kinks and rewriting some parts but I would really appreciate it if someone out there in the deviantart comunity would read my story and help me out because goodness knows I miss spelling and word errors that the computer as well as myself doesnt pick up. I'm also interested in finding someone who would be willing to draw the